So, concerning the mix, first off, I dont really have much to complain about, but people shouldnt really turn to me for that. Perhaps there is a bit of an area in the lows where the pad synth sounds a bit distorted, but I would personally not attempt to change that too much, because theres some nice beefiness. Regarding structure and such, theres i plenty to be desired. The envelope attack variation is nice and adds change, but it gets quite repetitive after it is just repeated over and over...
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yea.. part of that is probably because i did this in under 30 minutes
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Otherwise, I dont really have much to say about the perc, I think the mix of the techno beat and amen go quite well together and its fun and groovey.
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It is melodically a bit stale. Some introduction of a new syth or change of melody or harmony could really help this. Also, it sounds a lot like just like loops in a tracker program being muted in and out. Some song structure like a bridge and more distinguishable and varying energy (its always going to be different from person to person, just judge by what you feel is right)
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