Animal -Feat [ꂑ♥ꌇ]GreenTeaⅽ[ː̠̈ː̠̈] SR

Luminoux, ☬Prod. GTea☬
105 Jan 19, 23 Hip Hop
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Luminoux My names Lumi and I'm zooming in and out of all these traps, john cena couldnt see me cuz I grew up with them savs, keep a pump at my dads, and you know I keep a strap, lotta evil people out here tryna reap on what I have, all these haters talk about me please come say it to my face, if push came to shove you couldn't keep up with my pace, its true in what they say that slow and steady wins the race, i keep the game honest and my drugs are never laced, you disgrace, you aint got nothing on me, I know I accidentally stole your bitch I'm sorry, you know I gotta keep a full clip on me, i started after last year when they shot my homie. my names Lumi and I keep the dice rolling, keep packs moving knocking pins like I'm bowling, (kingpins) overflowing in pussy so don't get your girl tookin, always looking over my shoulder so i don't get booked in. _______________________________________________ [ꂑ♥ꌇ]GreenTeaⅽ[ː̠̈ː̠̈] SR fuck all that shit and i made yo bitch boring pullup the foreign i made yo bitch pouring call me at morning her text im ignoring she tried to test me but im still recording I churn up all the butter and i make it to milk and then she make it explode within a little bit of guilt I speed out around the track going 90 imma tilt im fucking with a case then i fake all to built Hitten round the corner bitch why you tasty you whippen round that ass but why you so pasty im shopping for a suit but its only at macy's im rocking in the green I got my girl katy I aint got time for the wap yo mama on my dick and you know I got top damn girl what you gotta do i aint paying you, whatcu tryna put me through spearing through leg now i can't get to you how can I walk when yo boy he got the talk a bullet to the head then i slapped him with the chalk got dozens of these hoes revolving round my cock ooh

         
Feb 9, 23

what was updated on the track?

Feb 9, 23

so are you adding vocals.... or what😅

Feb 9, 23

??

Jan 19, 23

good

Jan 19, 23

thank you.

Jan 19, 23

Honestly. I like the beat. However, both of y'all need a better mic. Ik you're working with what you got but I'm just sayin. Song needs more bass and the melody needs to change every once in a while so that same sound isn't so boring. The bpm change could have progressively gotten slower with the fade out instead of just immediately changing. Reverb on the melody and vocals would've been nice and more sidechaining on the vocals so no random air is there. That's all I have to say. Keep grindin.

Jan 19, 23

always respect honesty homie

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Jan 19, 23

further edits

Jan 19, 23

For those who wanna know, Luminoux was the first verse, and I start at like

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Jan 19, 23

i fixed my vocals

Jan 19, 23

i gotta repub