This is dope, I would have structured the chorus a little different, but that's just me. This is overall some dope shit though.
Oct 4, 15
oh my fuck this is awesome
Oct 4, 15
"lightning is a plasma, BYEEEEAAAW" ~Lynn 2015
Sep 20, 15
Filthy
Sep 18, 15
I like the new beginning
Sep 15, 15
yes
Sep 15, 15
nice
Sep 15, 15
yes i hear the new bass
republished
Sep 15, 15
Added a fat bass. Can you tell where it is? lol
Sep 12, 15
could harmonize better*
Sep 12, 15
Structurally nice. The screech noise could harmonize can better with a thick bass. It doesn't have to be a heavy bass, just a thick one. This is nice, tho. :P
Sep 11, 15
and turn the volume of the hats down (final advice, i promise)
Sep 11, 15
oh yh, and less white noize
Sep 11, 15
Btw im sorry if im coming accross too strongly, i just really like the idea and would love to see it reach its full potential. I can see you put a lot of work into this so far, and if you like it as it is (its great rn) then you dont have to do anything more to improve it, this is just my opinion of what could be done, it might make it sound worse in your opinion, but that's opinions for you.
Sep 11, 15
I personally think the snare should be changed because right now it kinda sounds like somebody hit a cardboard box and eqed it. Also maybe if you turned down the volume of the high pitched screams it would help this track sound a lot better.
Sep 11, 15
These wubs sound so profeshinal (like better than Navors growls), but this track will need a lot of improving before it sounds like dubstep that could be found on UKF or something like that (but it definitely could if you made a few small changes).
tb to this
This is dope, I would have structured the chorus a little different, but that's just me. This is overall some dope shit though.
oh my fuck this is awesome
"lightning is a plasma, BYEEEEAAAW" ~Lynn 2015
Filthy
I like the new beginning
yes
nice
yes i hear the new bass
Added a fat bass. Can you tell where it is? lol
could harmonize better*
Structurally nice. The screech noise could harmonize can better with a thick bass. It doesn't have to be a heavy bass, just a thick one. This is nice, tho. :P
and turn the volume of the hats down (final advice, i promise)
oh yh, and less white noize
Btw im sorry if im coming accross too strongly, i just really like the idea and would love to see it reach its full potential. I can see you put a lot of work into this so far, and if you like it as it is (its great rn) then you dont have to do anything more to improve it, this is just my opinion of what could be done, it might make it sound worse in your opinion, but that's opinions for you.
I personally think the snare should be changed because right now it kinda sounds like somebody hit a cardboard box and eqed it. Also maybe if you turned down the volume of the high pitched screams it would help this track sound a lot better.
These wubs sound so profeshinal (like better than Navors growls), but this track will need a lot of improving before it sounds like dubstep that could be found on UKF or something like that (but it definitely could if you made a few small changes).
A lot of samples but great outcome! Good Job!
This is 100% AT. If anyone was wondering lol
impressive amount of work put into this :P