Yo you asked for my feedback on this... i feel like you could have made another little simple melody and brought it in for the verse or hook... 808 is a little overkill but its an easy fix, its on key which is good so props on that brotha... Its a simple beat and simplicity is key in order for rappers nowadays, I might would have added a triangle (ding sound) but other than that its pretty good bra. Keep up the good work !
bruh this guy's expression in the pic strongly reminds me of that douchebag portrayed by Trevor Wallace in that 2-part YouTube comedy thing "The Guy Who Never Left His Hometown"
this is dope the only thing i'd say is you could add a few more percussion sounds like warped mid toms or something to fill in the beat a bit more cuz parts seemed abit bare but its lit tho xD
Yo you asked for my feedback on this... i feel like you could have made another little simple melody and brought it in for the verse or hook... 808 is a little overkill but its an easy fix, its on key which is good so props on that brotha... Its a simple beat and simplicity is key in order for rappers nowadays, I might would have added a triangle (ding sound) but other than that its pretty good bra. Keep up the good work !
808 is a little overkill but i'm digging it
make another piano melody on top of this but faster and way higher, will sound dope af. fire beat tho
jheeee
bruh this guy's expression in the pic strongly reminds me of that douchebag portrayed by Trevor Wallace in that 2-part YouTube comedy thing "The Guy Who Never Left His Hometown"
I don't really give crit, but if I were to give it i would give the piano some reverb and mix the track a little bit more.
idk how to mix
great but add the piano some reverb
this is dope the only thing i'd say is you could add a few more percussion sounds like warped mid toms or something to fill in the beat a bit more cuz parts seemed abit bare but its lit tho xD