Yo you asked for my feedback on this... i feel like you could have made another little simple melody and brought it in for the verse or hook... 808 is a little overkill but its an easy fix, its on key which is good so props on that brotha... Its a simple beat and simplicity is key in order for rappers nowadays, I might would have added a triangle (ding sound) but other than that its pretty good bra. Keep up the good work !
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808 is a little overkill but i'm digging it
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make another piano melody on top of this but faster and way higher, will sound dope af. fire beat tho
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jheeee
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bruh this guy's expression in the pic strongly reminds me of that douchebag portrayed by Trevor Wallace in that 2-part YouTube comedy thing "The Guy Who Never Left His Hometown"
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this fire asf
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I don't really give crit, but if I were to give it i would give the piano some reverb and mix the track a little bit more.
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great but add the piano some reverb
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this is dope the only thing i'd say is you could add a few more percussion sounds like warped mid toms or something to fill in the beat a bit more cuz parts seemed abit bare but its lit tho xD
