Some times the chops are a bit out of sync. Maybe try changing the drum pattern into something more simple (Not too simple but yeh). In the drop the chords cut a bit out and maybe try layering them a bit more (With layering i mean add like a lead, screech, saw tick,, bass (not sub) and then some minor details). But You're doing good.
i fexed it agin
Ye i think its done now
This has come quite far. Take my word for it... or skye's. Your pick.
i did stuff. trust me.
Yas bb, could use still some cleaning up in the intro but its lit rn
Some times the chops are a bit out of sync. Maybe try changing the drum pattern into something more simple (Not too simple but yeh). In the drop the chords cut a bit out and maybe try layering them a bit more (With layering i mean add like a lead, screech, saw tick,, bass (not sub) and then some minor details). But You're doing good.
I'm open to any advice or criticism on this. I honestly have no clue how good or bad this is.