Astro

LM Beats
46 Jul 21, 19 Trap
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Trap shattered

Let me take u on a space trip to mars

         
Snad Breugen
Jul 21, 19

I'm not trap fan enough to tell you more than: the beat you put under the melody loop is not original but also not bad.

yito ☮
Jul 22, 19

VVV try checking bubblz

Snad Breugen
Jul 21, 19

My first comment was no compliment. People who post tracks on my wall want my honest opinion without diplomacy ;)

Snad Breugen
Jul 21, 19

try adding a bit more of your own. Just taking a loop and add some drums is not really original. We have some really good Trap producers here. Maybe you should have a look at their drafts

LM Beats
Jul 21, 19

dont really have much experience with pianos

@nomadnohome
Jul 21, 19

intro should be like a quiet to loud

@nomadnohome
Jul 21, 19

and format the song as well like verse one, chorus, etc.

@nomadnohome
Jul 21, 19

needa a kick section to be more interesting

@nomadnohome
Jul 21, 19

clap quieter, 808 louder or more "close to my ears"