that's a little better. the bass is too quiet now though. boost it with a compressor.
also the lowest note in the bass pattern is a little too low... it sounds like it can't breathe xD
try boosting the lows with an eq? or maybe transposing the whole track up?
i think the melody can be better. outlining triads, fifths, and just straight arpeggios are kinda boring, make it so each note means something. also yeah they kinda clash (pretty much agree with opaqity right here)
already that sounds much better! now one of the main things I can suggest is beefing up the bass a little bit. choose a better... timbre for the bass and with that take it down an octave.
Very good track!
good shit homie.
lovely!
Now it's finished. Pun intended. Again :P
damn
i meant a middle section after what you already have here lel
how 2 keep middle part (unfinished) not empty?
add a middle section lel and then a second main part and add variations and all dat
how 2 keep interesting?
Put on some more stereo and made the arpeggio sound a little better.
Make sure to put compressors on everything. :p and stereo enhancers! always nice to touch up a track with stereo
Made everything sound more finished. Pun intended.
that's better :d
Tweaked the bass.
that's a little better. the bass is too quiet now though. boost it with a compressor. also the lowest note in the bass pattern is a little too low... it sounds like it can't breathe xD try boosting the lows with an eq? or maybe transposing the whole track up?
Fixed the bass.
i think the melody can be better. outlining triads, fifths, and just straight arpeggios are kinda boring, make it so each note means something. also yeah they kinda clash (pretty much agree with opaqity right here)
yas what opaqity said
already that sounds much better! now one of the main things I can suggest is beefing up the bass a little bit. choose a better... timbre for the bass and with that take it down an octave.
Fixed a few things and removed the slidey stuff.