Cover of track Forever & Ever Remix [WIP] by sky
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Forever & Ever Remix [WIP]

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Yo,

You guys asked for me to try and finish this remix.

Here is a little wip I thought of.

Tell me what you think.

Posting soon

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    Noir

    I was going to give a crit on this as a remix, but since there's apparently no record of the original, I can't really do that. The kick and snare are blowing out the rest of the track. I get the whole, "Oh that's just the trap sound chill m9," but no, don't do that. You also need to work on timing for the notes in the melody. When you add glide, you have to start the note earlier for some notes so that the *weight* of the note is in the right place.

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      sky

      Thanks for some actual critique. I'll try and do that

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      Noir

      You also need to have more to the melody than an 8 bar loop. That gets old even with countermelody.

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    Noir

    Where's the original?

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      sky

      Original got deleted because the navor account got deleted

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    embr

    i absolutely love the vibrato thing going on with the lead

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    JARx

    The build up is really long, other than that tho its really good.

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    Vulkron

    mee likey

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    Zux

    the snare lol

    this is def going places tho

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    owtlet

    lets make a track like this

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    Limauru

    Oh my god.

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    dove

    <3

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    I Z U

    second >.>

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    sky

    "1st comment" lol