Frozen Grapes [Dance]

nwokn
87 Feb 18, 14 Other
0:00 / 2:46
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A Dance track. Constructive criticiscm plz Rule 1: never write a description if it doesn't need one or if you can't be bothered too.

         
Feb 25, 14

SICK

Feb 19, 14

This is amazing btw

Feb 19, 14

Now I want to collab with you on a Dance track! Hmu soon if you want to collab

Feb 19, 14

Ok I'll try and fix dat then

Feb 19, 14

but seriously for a second song.. this is great, just great!!! GREAT! AMAZING! BEUUUUTTIFFAALLL!!! thats all.. bye

Feb 19, 14

okay.. constructive criticism? this is a really good song.. like unbeleivable.. like how is this your second song.. really HOW!?!! anyway.. see those waveforms.. really bad, on the centroid you never want to level of sound to hit the red bar.. NEVER! and also the synth at 0.40 the low one.. i honestly dont like it.. i mean i kno its your bass, but make it feel more alive and feeling to it, it sounds dull.. probably im guessing its a square?! anyway, thats all i have..

Feb 18, 14

your tracks are awesome keep it up!!!!

Feb 18, 14

it was meant to say "to"

Feb 18, 14

lol wrong too