at around i feel as though the low sounding synth sort of doesn't fit, and it makes the lead sound very odd, other then that, it is definitely something i feel would be in a game ^_^, you should add some reverb on everything and maybe a tiny bit of delay on the snare
no problem, I always try to apply the small amount of knowledge, for that low sounding synth you could try placing it in key with the lead, if you don't understand scales i'd look them up, they are very useful for creating music
at around i feel as though the low sounding synth sort of doesn't fit, and it makes the lead sound very odd, other then that, it is definitely something i feel would be in a game ^_^, you should add some reverb on everything and maybe a tiny bit of delay on the snare