200 Oct 17, 18 Trap
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pm oct16,2018 im still getting better

         
Oct 18, 18

you asked for crit, so imma be brutally honest...this is stuff i'm not too keen on just because there's not much to it like it's a single sample stretched out for one minute with a rass effect and it just repeats, it feels almost dry and what i'd suggest is not relying to heavily on many samples instead focus on shifting to using more synths and other tools to get a more authentic feel...and since you did ask for crit this is all this is i'm not arguing just stating my opinion

Oct 18, 18

Thanks for the input

Oct 18, 18

but overall in my own personal opinion, i'm not huge on this, it lacks a few things like what would benefit it in my eyes is maybe a sub and a good little chord progression rather than a sample with a slowed effect on it and maybe a change in the drums and percussion just for the simple fact that the layout is almost the same as any other trap song i hear and after it's used a lot it kinda gets satire