You may look like it's all right,

You might act like it's all right,

But you're hiding something,

And you won't tell what.

It's Eating you on the inside,

its devouring your soul,

yet so you won't tell,

what's going on.

-Karan Pol

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  • Sorry alch, I'm not sure why this wasn't faved. Maybe the server was all dicked up. Well Again, Great work. : )

  • Great Track Alchemist, Your doing very good. :) And the poem means a lot to me.

    I can relate. One day I'll put a personal poem of mine up on my wall and you'll know why I like this one so much. Awesome work.

  • thank you rabbit and jinx :D :):):)

  • very beautiful!

  • yups

    :)

  • nice meditative groove i love this - sometimes you find yourself in a dark place with no way and you cry out but nobody seems to hear - in the end you realize you are really crying out to yourself :)

  • :) !

  • Belle melodie!! :)

  • thanks uprising! :D:D:D

  • i like the arpeggios

  • good work man !!

  • thanks coma! :D:D:D

  • Very nice :)

  • THANKs DIGI!! suprisingly, i only worked around 2 or 3 hours on this one. :D but thanks for the comment!

  • nice song man!