Imma have someone put vocals on this, so that'll be fun...
Feb 2, 23
y'know
one of these years
republished
Dec 20, 22
Bells, raised piano volume. Still a WIP, but nearing completion.
Jan 18, 23
Yeah, no, I need to finish this.
I really need to finish this.
Dec 31, 22
I should finish this💀
Dec 20, 22
the bass is a bit off key, ngl but i like it
Dec 20, 22
Thanks man
Dec 20, 22
like ziroh said, change it a up a bit later in the song, add some more synths, seems like the bass is really carrying the whole track, and i can barely hear the piano in some parts, so maybe up the piano a bit, maybe by like 3-5 db or maybe turn the bass down by a similar amount
Dec 20, 22
thats one hella good transition
Dec 20, 22
holy shit though
Dec 20, 22
i like the synth i mean
republished
Dec 18, 22
Decided the synth didn't fit :(
republished
Dec 17, 22
Added 808 switchup, added piano synth. Let me know if anything sounds off.
Dec 16, 22
I like the perc werc in the beginning.
Then that muted bass comes in followed by the sub? very nice. You start automating the piano a bit and that sounds neat and keeps things interesting.
The highlight of this track is for sure that stutter/sweep sound at and in your other transitions as well.
when you come back to the pattern at , I think it may be advantageous to add a new sound, to make the second half different than the first, and to keep the listening ears interested
Dec 16, 22
Now what I'm about to say next is completely my opinion in terms of composition, but I think if you made that second verse different than the first you could play that and then transition back in to the intro/outro starting at or around there somewhere (wherever the first note on that piano hits).
Dec 16, 22
this is so cool good job! :)
Dec 16, 22
Just something I should probably say, I used this mostly as an experiment to try editting samples, something I've never done before. Therefore, the draft is mostly audiotracks, machinists, and effects.
Imma have someone put vocals on this, so that'll be fun...
Bells, raised piano volume. Still a WIP, but nearing completion.
the bass is a bit off key, ngl but i like it
Decided the synth didn't fit :(
Added 808 switchup, added piano synth. Let me know if anything sounds off.
I like the perc werc in the beginning. Then that muted bass comes in followed by the sub? very nice. You start automating the piano a bit and that sounds neat and keeps things interesting. The highlight of this track is for sure that stutter/sweep sound at and in your other transitions as well. when you come back to the pattern at , I think it may be advantageous to add a new sound, to make the second half different than the first, and to keep the listening ears interested
this is so cool good job! :)
Just something I should probably say, I used this mostly as an experiment to try editting samples, something I've never done before. Therefore, the draft is mostly audiotracks, machinists, and effects.
pretty nice, just use more synths