the ideas are awesome just work with the sound a little more with the mastering and mixing and sound design and then ur ok! the sound design is pretty gud tho
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it sounded kinda weird to me with those 'mini synth rises' (RISES NOT RISERS). And also on the main drop where there's that gap with the Mario thing, dunno it sounds too far apart and the sample sort of takes off the energy. Other than that its yet another great slice of Happy/UK from you as usual and I really like the melody, it's great! Big tune!