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Nicholas Smith
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Batoune & The Brewers

Very clean mix, i love your delay and your drums, very expressive track, with the good level of melancholy whitch need the synthwave style. 20/20, a very good moment for me

Nicholas Smith
Oct 20, 19

Thank you for your extremely well crafted and original comment

andy
Sep 20, 19

I love the chords /pads! Personally I think that arp in the beginning is a bit harsh, but really it's all up to personal taste. Also that bass in the middle is sick.

naut
Sep 19, 19

tasteful improvements :)

Nicholas Smith
republished
Sep 17, 19

-9/17- beefed up the drums a bit added slight reverb to the snare added risers added bass in middle part automated filters in middle part bass variation in second part

ego
Sep 17, 19

awesomeness

Snad Breugen
Sep 17, 19

I really like it. Drums are a bit dry yes, but on the otherhand they sound pretty authentic. Maybe the bass synth a bit bassier and wider

naut
Sep 17, 19

breaking it down to a calm section without drums and just the filtered pads somewhere in the middle would be nice, also a great opportunity to have another build up

Nicholas Smith
Sep 17, 19

I was thinking about doing something like that, I’ve actually got chords muted in the published version, I just couldn’t figure out a good way of transitioning into

etterath
Sep 17, 19

drums feel a bit weak. i would beef them up a bit with a waveshaper. this is really good though. cool synths. nice melodies.

relative mAJOR
Sep 19, 19

haven't listened yet, but if I think back to Barely Alive - Odyssey, maybe some delay on the snare, and reverb on the kick?

naut
Sep 17, 19

waveshaper might be good but I think some short delay and more reverb would make the drums more retrowavey