In the hour glass

SissyWhistle
257 Nov 5, 12 Other
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hey people! this is a song in the making, im kinda having trouble with what i should do next. If you could take a little of time to write a comment about how i can make this song sound better and fuller i would really appriciate it. (and sorry for my terrible spelling :P)

         
Nov 5, 12

Ok thats kinda what i was thinking of doing, and thank you :)

Nov 5, 12

The intro is cool. I would just change the drumbeat to add more bass toward the beginning and maybe add a bass synth to add some depth and rhythm. Nice job!