Into the Unknown

I've released a slower version anyway. 2 entries in a contest is always better than 1. Since this is my only track the only thing I could do was enter twice at 2 different speeds. I think I like it better a little slower actually. But I'll probably change my mind repeatedly about that over the next few days.

No m8, it's what it is, it's fine!!....really good first track, I'd say :) !

Thanks yafee? Do you think it's too fast?

Crazy stuff, m8, but pretty cool, G1m8:)!

Thanks Onyx. I used Magix. It has the effects built into it and the track grid isn't as user friendly. There are more possibilities here I think. I'm really enjoying playing around with all the different tools. The variety of sound you can get is quite impressive.

Cool synths and beat. Which studio software were you using before this?

Thank you ssagg

very good.

Thanks DS. I just wanted to get it as good as I could since it's my only track and I figured I might as well enter it into the contest and since the deadline is Friday I can't make another one.

better :) funky weird sound.... but still good as a frst track :) just move on :)

I've lowered the mid in the bass as JonJon suggested and he was right. It sounds much better. I also adjusted balance on the melody as Arche suggested and moved it back and forth in the fx parts as I thought that made them stand out more. I think it sounds better and I'm almost ready to enter this in the club contest. Maybe I'll have beginners luck. Let me know what you think before I submit it. Thanks for listening and advice you might have.

Oh and yours too SB!"

Thanks Freddy. I'll check out your music when I get home tonight.

Not a bad start. What's been said so far is great advice. I personally don't have much more to add other than keep producing. Keep making stuff and you'll find yourself growing both musically and as a person. This hobby can be immensely rewarding.

Thanks everyone for your advice. I'll play with it some more including everything you've told me and see what happens.

One of the hardest things to do is have multiple things going on at once. The only way you can do it without it all turning to mud is paying attention to what frequencies each voice is occupying as well as what lane (panning). Making room in frequency and space gives you a chance to go wild with all these sounds. It takes a while to do it and I've failed more times than succeeded in trying it ;)

& listen to the pro's below....under my previous comment ;)

There's a bit to much going on. Things get smuthered. But I see good things coming ;)

Thank you Arche 3.0. I will listen to your work as well. Any input you might have is appreciated as well. Thanks for listening.

I probably should be much better by now but I think coming here will help me a lot as I can look at what other people are doing and learn fro them what I haven't discovered fo myself.