Invisible

Korvent
671 Sep 19, 14 House
0:00 / 5:09
13
House House chill

Listen with speakers or headphones! For those who love in secret. It was love at first look, will of the angels hook And suddenly you feel like you’re an empty book Waiting to be filled with a story from the skies You’re already dreaming of a new shiny start When she illuminates your little wounded heart But deep inside you it’s clear, your heart never lies She doesn’t see the bright spark in your opened eyes She doesn’t feel the pulse resonating in your heart You’re too shy, beeing invisible is your art And deep in your head, your hope fade away and dies You’re stuck into the glowing light of her shadow Trying to catch the sun through the broken window You start your endless fall in the rising darkness And now she’s gone and you feel completely hopeless Time passes and she still ignoring your feelings You finally find enough courage to tell her You already know the answer, but you’re waiting And now it’s done, your heart is colder than ever But you’ve never gave up, the fight is not finished Love is immortal and you're still invisible You would wish to have the strength to tell her all but Love is immortal and you're still invisible ---------------------------------------------------------- About this track : It sucks but I didn't publish anything for months so... About the little text : I tried to write what I couldn't put in the music (due to its suckness (but even this I couldn't...)). Please don't mind all the english mistakes :) I'm searching for a vocalist for this track (maybe the lyrics could be above but it's quite bad... really bad) so if you can help me don't hesitate^^ Oh and there is a little click at 0.00 and I couldn't remove it... any suggestions?

         
Dec 28, 14

Nice one!

Dec 14, 14

merci :)))

Dec 13, 14

tres chouette

Dec 13, 14

Wow bravo ! et elle sucks pas ;)

Dec 10, 14

merci beaucoup^^ ba en fait je sais pas plus je l'écoutais plus je la trouvais chiante :)

Dec 10, 14

Wow vraiment super et je vois pas pourquoi tu dis "it sucks" alors que franchement c'est du très bon boulot ! Et bravo pour les paroles, y'a vraiment du style !

Nov 9, 14

thanks a lot torn :)

Nov 9, 14

love it !!

Sep 21, 14

excellent :)

Sep 20, 14

merci grotzo! haha je suis assez content de celle la^^

Sep 20, 14

Bon boulot, et coup de cœur pour le son de la basse. Pour l'ajout de la voix, à mon avis un "talk over" serait l'idéal (ça limite la recherche d'un vrai chanteur !). J'aime ce texte aussi et certaines phrases du genre : " The glowing light of her shadow"....

Sep 19, 14

thanks man :)

Sep 19, 14

aaagh i love this