Oh boy Im really proud of this wowowowowowo

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  • I love the transition at 0:40 and 1: 54!!!

  • ight

    lets just put this here, good idea, but i cant hear the wubs for shit

    the mix in the arp is to loud, i would also put some stereo detune on dat,

    and the bass could be messed with, but that last part is horrible

    • oh yea and sidechaining

    • yea,

      for the last part, i would have the more slides to the bass

      and from the first drop, have the same kinda chords, but filtered

      its a good idea, you just need to learn how to put mind to paper as so to speak

    • Thank you for the feedback :)

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  • Republished

    ah shit i muted a thing

  • Republished

    more smol fixes

  • Republished

    synth changes, second drop tweaked, arp volume changes

  • honestly same as kibbey. overall great idea

  • This isn't bad at all tbh. There's a synth that's obviously louder than the rest and it sounds like it doesn't fit well with the others. I'd say mess with volume and/or mixing. But yeah, this isn't half bad. The second breakdown is great in concept. It just needs some mixing. You have good melodies and a nice grasp of basic percussion. Just beyond the horizon of this track lies an outright bop. :)

    • Thank you! Also for the follow and everything. I'll get on to tweaking a few things and such then it should be better

  • bro this needs to chart lmao

  • damn great job

  • THIS is AWSEome NGL :O