Sadness(Fixed)

WoundedFlesh
16 Dec 17, 20 Other
0:00 / 1:13
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Cover Credit: https://pixabay.com/photos/japan-osaka-night-asia-landmark-2014619/

         
Dec 17, 20

Cool

Dec 17, 20

thx

Dec 17, 20

here's some thoughts: I like the punchy bass at the beginning This song shows more knowledge of "song progression" than your previous tracks, which shows that you are learning. I felt like the sounds were competing for attention. I'd say designate an instrument to be loudest, or if you want it to be different at different times, automate the gain on your instruments.

Dec 17, 20

The high reverb on your drums leaves a cool sounding echo in the intro of your song. Like a breathy voice going "haahhh" . cool