im not great at giving good feedback but all id say is it needs more elements and its too repetitive. also a good thing to know when getting into producing is music is subjective and there is no right or wrong ways of making music everyone has diffrent tastes and u should only listen to feedback that u think resonates with u i wish i knew that when i first got into producing cuz i would always be thinking im doing stuff wrong but honestly theres no wrong way to make music (1/2)
altho it doesnt hurt to learn the basics too i always say u gotta know the rules to know how to break em properly so even if u think someones feedback is bad doesnt mean u cant use it to grow cuz it can help to understand where they are coming from and what made them think that yk but hey im justa guy on the internet maybe i got bad feedback (2/2)