Last Breathe of Day

Dei Servus
616 Dec 2, 12 Other
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When we come down to the end of our short lived days its never enough and for some its too much. Some too short, but for most not long enough. Track Creation: I really really enjoyed making this and surprisingly it only took a few short hours. Most of the time was spent making piano parts, 4 (in 4 octaves) in all but 3 main ones. When I was making this I worked alot on thinking compositionally ( Soprano, Alto, Tenor, Bass) with moving lines (one going up, and down/ counterpoints) obviously this repeats to much to be a full compositional work but Im just flexing my ideas to my greatest extent. This song is one of my favotites because of the amount of emotion in it and its beauty. the "chorus" or loud points in this werent what IO was excpecting and thats my only gripe about this. Please comment and tell me what oyu think! :) Enjoy

         
ATHeat
Dec 14, 12

A true work of art.

ClickZ
Dec 9, 12

me track of the week

Dei Servus
Dec 8, 12

thank youu guys sooo much it means alot!! :)

Ante
Dec 7, 12

You're always making really happy stuff, itd be interesting to hear you write something sad. This is very good though, that piano break is beautiful. It's a hopeful song. Good job :)

NOLANDNORF
Dec 5, 12

Woah it clean and not elctro lol anyways this is amazing now did you write the piano part?

E I D Ø L O N
Dec 4, 12

this is awesome dei! the piano is amazing! :D

sbronz
Dec 3, 12

very nice my friend! I love the complexity of melody and I must agree with Joel, it sounds like a fantasy song that brings you to another world :-)

Dei Servus
Dec 3, 12

Alright confession time, I don't play piano like at all hahaha though you'd think so haha thank you all for your awesome comments!!! :)

SSagara
Dec 3, 12

Wow that piano melody is HUGE man! I'm with jace this is my fav of yours :o Do you play piano?

valt
Dec 3, 12

Entertaining melody and clean sounds. Very nice!

ssagg
Dec 3, 12

Beautiful track.

thedoctor
Dec 2, 12

I got a similar track with some trumpet sounds and I'm in the middle of adding a piano, but its so hard for me to make up my mind about what would really make it amazing.. ya know..

thedoctor
Dec 2, 12

This is Beautiful.... Really Beautiful.. I can't believe it's seven minutes.. I'm already halfway through and It doesn't feel that long.. Great track Dei Servus.. }=) if you ever wanna post a track on my wall feel free..

Approaching Human

Now I personally think the beginning would sound better if the synth that begins at :16 was more clean, maybe a diff waveform or less res. or something. And I think that around you should turn down the trumpet synth and the other synth i was talking about, let the piano shine through so it doesn't sound as muddy. Besides that, it's a very heartfelt track and I enjoyed it! No doubt I'll be coming back to listen to this. Good work!

Approaching Human

Nice work! piano sounds so grant! this, this is the bee's knees, it's the cat's meow, it's... it's friken' beautiful! love the transitions, very well done, good sir.

Polygon Cube
Dec 2, 12

those final minutes were excellent

seb
Dec 2, 12

cool:)

ClickZ
Dec 2, 12

this is quite beautiful

Dei Servus
Dec 2, 12

yeah it was I made sure all the notes I held out were part of the chords hahaha but hey, life of a composer even easier ith all the stupid crazy transpositions you have to between instrument like alto sax and french horn hahaha ..............I spellled Breath wrong........... This is just plain embarassing......... Wow

arche3.0
Dec 2, 12

The multiple part voicing must have been tough. That's why I prefer to drop notes in my chords between voices. Not worth making sure they are all there LOL