onion rings [WIP]

nah fam work on it as a wip. people will keep coming back to listen and itll prolly chart if you keep working on it. Its a good concept, you just need to work on it a little longer

ayyy haha nice, i'll probs hide this anyway the only reason i released it was because i was bored

my op-onion :p

that's your opinion bro, i respect that

then theres the HUGE train of scilence at the end of the track. Idk man it just feels bland and empty

In attention to the larger second half, the crushing sounds like clipping and it loses its atmosphere when i listen to it. the track entirely misses a mark on stereo sound. The whole track feels mono,plain, and flat. Theres no recognizable bass line. the one youve got in there now is so muddied down by the mid-range chords and wavey synths.

Theres a few things that make this not vibe with me. understand that this isnt meant to rip on you individually. The sidechain needs a quicker attack. Its only on a few of the synths and the sine wave that isnt getting compressed by it makes the hole thing sound like a carnival. It sounds like this would have gone over better as chiptune if the percs were bit-crushed more traditionally. The hi hats are places so abstractly in the first bit that it doesnt accent the kick and snare enough.

buuuut if you're being serious i'd like to understand what's wrong with it

don't get what you mean these some spicy flavored onion rings boy