quarantine rap challenge

What the fuck happened here

Something can be disorganized and simple, not that hard to understand bud. i get what you're trying to do with the 808's but its just disorganized.

But you just accepted it

wait, how can something be disorganized AND simple? im trying to actually figure out if theres anything i can do to like, fix this up, and ive realized i dont understand anything you said.

See, ill accept that, thank you

Bruh, u muted me ages ago, lmfao Also, ive never asked to collab with u, nor do i want to. I said that because u LITERALLY SAID, "at least u got my comment" that sounds self entitled to me

This track needs lots of work, not even the sound design is good, this typuh trap isn't good either, i feel like everything is disorganized, even the 808s the melody's really simple, i would've chosen a sample over this. i dont hear anyone rapping to this. There you go, your constructive criticism.

And u kinda missed the whole point of this. This is a quick beat that i want ppl to rap over. It needs to be empty so there is enough room for vocals

Howabout u tell me how i can improve it instead?

I know a lot of people who just because i rejected collabs said i feel like im worth more than them, despicable. Feel free to comment on my tracks n stuff, i wont stop you.

U uh, just proved my point, gg

I never said i feel holy, neither do i put myself above people. Thanks for taking the time to say this to me. By "this beat needs lots of work" i mean as a whole its very terrible. But thats not what we want to hear!

Damn, thats really self entitled. You think ur so holy that ur comments are worth something!? Bruh, a GOOD comment wouldve been constructive criticism. so not only does ur name do nothing to make ur comment mean smthing, it wasnt even helpful. Get yo self entitled ass on off my track

throwing shades not gonna go any good for you, at least u got my comment

id ask for advice but i think youd end up making it worse ;(

yeah, the intro is mad quiet, u rite

do it