This isnt even 2 minutes, ill finish a track one day, promise
But nah really, im going to this music college today where I live for a 3rd interview kinda thing so this track is to show them really, critique me though obviously
Yeah I hate when that happens, no worries dude :)
But yeah that helps a tremendous amount, at first i was like, ah mate algebra isnt my strong suit but nah this helps a lot.
It'll probably open a up a lot of space to add a few more textures/layers, and see if i can extend it to at least 3 minutes haha ;)
I had a little more in depth comment, but it was too long and i lost it, so i had to rewrite. Sry. Also, sry if this doesn’t make any sense, just trying to help from your request post.
So if you ask me, what you have can be broken up into 4 main parts with some flourishes in between some. A(-) B(-) C(-) D(-end) Z(45-) Y(-)
What i would recommend to extend it would be A + A(but you should play with adding some vocals from the B/C part) + B + C + Y + Z(you should flesh this out into an entire melodic line) + [Z with percussion] + A + B + Y + Z + C + Y + D
yeah, awesome lol. Glad if it helped. Let me know if you end up extending it. I'd like to have a listen.
Yeah I hate when that happens, no worries dude :) But yeah that helps a tremendous amount, at first i was like, ah mate algebra isnt my strong suit but nah this helps a lot. It'll probably open a up a lot of space to add a few more textures/layers, and see if i can extend it to at least 3 minutes haha ;)
I had a little more in depth comment, but it was too long and i lost it, so i had to rewrite. Sry. Also, sry if this doesn’t make any sense, just trying to help from your request post.
So if you ask me, what you have can be broken up into 4 main parts with some flourishes in between some. A(-) B(-) C(-) D(-end) Z(45-) Y(-) What i would recommend to extend it would be A + A(but you should play with adding some vocals from the B/C part) + B + C + Y + Z(you should flesh this out into an entire melodic line) + [Z with percussion] + A + B + Y + Z + C + Y + D
Sounds cool my friend