This isnt even 2 minutes, ill finish a track one day, promise

But nah really, im going to this music college today where I live for a 3rd interview kinda thing so this track is to show them really, critique me though obviously

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  • yeah, awesome lol. Glad if it helped. Let me know if you end up extending it. I'd like to have a listen.

  • Yeah I hate when that happens, no worries dude :)

    But yeah that helps a tremendous amount, at first i was like, ah mate algebra isnt my strong suit but nah this helps a lot.

    It'll probably open a up a lot of space to add a few more textures/layers, and see if i can extend it to at least 3 minutes haha ;)

  • I had a little more in depth comment, but it was too long and i lost it, so i had to rewrite. Sry. Also, sry if this doesn’t make any sense, just trying to help from your request post.

  • So if you ask me, what you have can be broken up into 4 main parts with some flourishes in between some. A( 0:00 - 0:40 ) B( 0:45 - 1:00 ) C( 1:00 - 1:15 ) D( 1:16 -end) Z(45- 0:47 ) Y( 0:59 - 1:01 )

    What i would recommend to extend it would be A + A(but you should play with adding some vocals from the B/C part) + B + C + Y + Z(you should flesh this out into an entire melodic line) + [Z with percussion] + A + B + Y + Z + C + Y + D

  • Sounds cool my friend