(Doodle) Arp Madness

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Should I keep going with this?

         
Nov 15, 18

This just keeps going up the charts, what on earth?

Nov 5, 18

I might have

Oct 26, 18

if not for the beat this would be a really cool song

Nov 2, 18

you're probably right

Oct 30, 18

I am willing to bet if I just changed up that snare you would have a completely different opinion of the track.

Oct 29, 18

it uses too much generic and stock sounds, they feel flat and just sound a bit boring, they feel off with the rest of the composition

Oct 26, 18

Would you care to elaborate on what about the beat you don't like?

Oct 26, 18

I'm not a big fan of the initial bass, but the arp that gets in at is pretty cool, and I love the build up, glide and melodies are also pretty cool. Depending where you plan on going with this, it could be a really fun/groovy track

Oct 27, 18

Now that you mention it that snare definitely does have a really long decay

Oct 27, 18

And I realise i just didn't know what part of the intro I didn't like, and I just assume it was the bass

Oct 27, 18

Actually Im relistening and I realise it's not the bassline itself, which is a pretty good cool classic trance bass. I think it's more about the drums: the snare seems unfit for the track, maybe it should be pitched up or its decay shortened. Anyways, I think if youd change the snare it would be better.

Oct 27, 18

What about the initial bass are you not a fan of? Is it the rhythm, the melodic line, the sound design?

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Oct 26, 18

Less empty space at the end

Oct 26, 18

Wow, everything sounds so much worse in the render...

Oct 26, 18

They have some problems with the rendering pipeline, from what I heard, hope they fix it soon