I originally wanted to make this into a song. Story: The cathedral was too calm I had died but I can naturally regenrate my body so my sibling was the only one that actually passed. It was rough for me seeing their lifeless body all dressed in white. I after the funeral sat there with a bottle of Vodka and bloodshot eyes...It was too peaceful in here which is what you would expect but it was an uncomfortable sense of peace as if this wasnt the end. It was just the beginning of something.. (SOMEONE GIVE ADVICE ON WHAT I SHOULD ADD IN HERE)
oh one other thing, i really like how the beginning synth transforms keys (ur going from a Bb major/g minor scale to Ab major/f minor in a way that works which is cool) but at youve got an E on the bottom end of that pattern that really sticks out, try moving it up by one note and it should be fine ;)
Jan 9, 17
you could work on the atmospherics of this much more but i like the basic idea of what you have, its nice. one thing tho, the vocal gets a bit repetitive, so maybe you could pitch shift it using a pitch delay or something from time to time? or just take the little bit you repeat, put it in a machiniste and then change the pitch for certain notes. just a suggestion, but youve got something really good to go on, please finish it :)
Jan 11, 17
I agree. I was wondering if anyone would say something about the vocals. Thanks for your advice. :))
Jan 9, 17
really dig the vox and piano - some burial related part of me wants to throw the percs thru a filter and turn that synth into a reese bass lol. great stuff tho kiu
Jan 9, 17
I was think about making the perc more impacting thanks for the suggestion :)
Jan 9, 17
this has chill vibes, i thought i left my youtube on the chill mix but i forgot i hit play on this xDDD
Jan 9, 17
Lol thanks man
Jan 9, 17
really nice mood going on here man great job
Jan 11, 17
Thanks for listening :))
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Jan 9, 17
added what I could without causing a computer glitch
republished
Jan 9, 17
added what I could without causing a computer glitch
TRACK 2
Them percussions on point
percs are sexy
percussion is great tho
oh one other thing, i really like how the beginning synth transforms keys (ur going from a Bb major/g minor scale to Ab major/f minor in a way that works which is cool) but at youve got an E on the bottom end of that pattern that really sticks out, try moving it up by one note and it should be fine ;)
you could work on the atmospherics of this much more but i like the basic idea of what you have, its nice. one thing tho, the vocal gets a bit repetitive, so maybe you could pitch shift it using a pitch delay or something from time to time? or just take the little bit you repeat, put it in a machiniste and then change the pitch for certain notes. just a suggestion, but youve got something really good to go on, please finish it :)
really dig the vox and piano - some burial related part of me wants to throw the percs thru a filter and turn that synth into a reese bass lol. great stuff tho kiu
this has chill vibes, i thought i left my youtube on the chill mix but i forgot i hit play on this xDDD
really nice mood going on here man great job
added what I could without causing a computer glitch
added what I could without causing a computer glitch