Begin Again

okin
205 Jul 21, 20 Electro
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DubLion
Jul 23, 20

sooo clean bro

okin
Jul 22, 20

Noice

ollie
Jul 21, 20

nice work man, really like this :D im not getting much lowend in the drop though? i had to turn my sub on full to get a whisper of bass haha

okin
Jul 21, 20

there's now a sub

okin
Jul 21, 20

Or it sounded muddy something like that but yh thanks for the crit it is pretty highpassed

okin
Jul 21, 20

Yh there's no actual sub lol I couldn't actually figure out the notes at first so I'll have to revisit it

RDz
Jul 21, 20

good stuff. love that supersaw in the drop

okin
Jul 21, 20

yh it was gonna do the same at the mark but i then added the arp instead otherwise it would've been blandish

RDz
Jul 21, 20

i think the stuttering fits quite well

okin
Jul 21, 20

thank u took an unexpected turn in the creation wasn't too sure on the manual stutter at but i think it works for the mood

okin
Jul 21, 20

;)

relative mAJOR
Jul 21, 20

WOW I love those chords. im getting really thrown off by that detuned bass saw i think you forgot to mono. a sub overlaps that bass saw and it is nasty and bubbly. same for when it fades in. same at . it might be my headphones but that kick feels panned a bit to the left thats throwing me off. the chords could use a bit of lowpassing. there are multiple subs again. the fx could use a bit of lowpassing. i love the nice calm ending.

okin
Jul 21, 20

thanks for the feedback the sound at 130 is just me modulating the cutoff point so its meant to be a rise to introduce the reverbed violin synth, just checked each earphone and the kick is able to be heared in both sides (i dont think i touched the pan of the kick at all haha) is a background arp it might be a bit hectic just because of all the different sounds and synths so might need cleaning up, also the lowpass on the effect is a good shout too thanks i'll be sure to change it :)

relative mAJOR
Jul 21, 20

i also dont like how the toms are panned to the left, especially the loud and sustained bass it has.

seb
Jul 21, 20

not bad kid

okin
Jul 21, 20

cheers kid