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  octane 2020-07-23

  sweet

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  DubLion 2020-07-23

  sooo clean bro

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  yito ☮ 2020-07-21

  nice

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    okin 2020-07-22

    Noice

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  ollie 2020-07-21

  nice work man, really like this :D im not getting much lowend in the drop though? i had to turn my sub on full to get a whisper of bass haha

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    okin 2020-07-21

    there's now a sub

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    okin 2020-07-21

    Or it sounded muddy something like that but yh thanks for the crit it is pretty highpassed

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    okin 2020-07-21

    Yh there's no actual sub lol I couldn't actually figure out the notes at first so I'll have to revisit it

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  RDz 2020-07-21

  good stuff. love that supersaw in the drop

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    okin 2020-07-21

    yh it was gonna do the same at the 3:21 mark but i then added the arp instead otherwise it would've been blandish

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    RDz 2020-07-21

    i think the stuttering fits quite well

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    okin 2020-07-21

    thank u took an unexpected turn in the creation wasn't too sure on the manual stutter at 02:45 but i think it works for the mood

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  takemeaway [w!p] 2020-07-21

  those drums are amazing

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    okin 2020-07-21

    ;)

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  relative mAJOR 2020-07-21

  WOW I love those chords. im getting really thrown off by that detuned bass saw i think you forgot to mono. 1:31 a sub overlaps that bass saw and it is nasty and bubbly. same for 1:56 when it fades in. same at 2:28 . it might be my headphones but that kick feels panned a bit to the left thats throwing me off. the chords could use a bit of lowpassing. 3:38 there are multiple subs again. 3:54 the fx could use a bit of lowpassing. i love the nice calm ending.

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    okin 2020-07-21

    thanks for the feedback the sound at 130 is just me modulating the cutoff point so its meant to be a rise to introduce the reverbed violin synth, just checked each earphone and the kick is able to be heared in both sides (i dont think i touched the pan of the kick at all haha) 3:38 is a background arp it might be a bit hectic just because of all the different sounds and synths so might need cleaning up, also the lowpass on the effect is a good shout too thanks i'll be sure to change it :)

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    relative mAJOR 2020-07-21

    i also dont like how the toms are panned to the left, especially the loud and sustained bass it has.

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  Audial 2020-07-21

  that pad is lush

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    okin 2020-07-21

    i'm glad it paid off <3

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  seb 2020-07-21

  not bad kid

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    relative mAJOR 2020-07-21

    im telling on my mommy on you

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    okin 2020-07-21

    cheers kid

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    solar plexus 2020-07-21

    lmao

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  raiji 2020-07-21

  im loving the atmosphere

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    okin 2020-07-21

    thanks for appreciating it, its pretty long but im glad u liked :)

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  okin 2020-07-21

  idk but here