There needs to be more changes in the song structure because it gets pretty monotonous quick. There aren’t many things happening as far as structure , it just repeats. There also needs to be a transition between when there’s a different section. I kinda also wish that there was something else adjusted or added to the sample to make this stand out. Another thing is the sample itself isn’t really the best or good in my opinion. The melody sounds kinda weird to me but this is just my critique.
gotta agree with nyuayno here. the vibe is there and i most definitely see potential. dont take it personally, these are necessary criticisms if you wanna get better bro