This is my remix of the song "Paradise" by Coldplay. I would love feedback (especially on the vocals, I can publish a version without vocals if they are too apalling). Not sure if I am allowed to remix this (due to copyright), if I am violating anything please let me know so I can take this song down.
Thanks to Ultimate Guitar tabs, Sparklesparkle for tabbing this song, Coldplay for making an awesome song! and Steven for singing this in physics :)
Special dedication to Jessie :) and to Mr.S's Period 7 AP Physics class (yes that means you Steven)
I really like this. I am also trying to figure out effects on user recorded vocals. Good luck with it. This sounds great though. I love that build-up at
Dec 22, 12
don´t panic
you did your own version
leave it like that
"Para-para-paradise!"
Oct 17, 12
Thanks man! wow thank you so much for the advice! I will definetly keep that in mind if I decide to do another song with vocals in it (i might not ever do that though haha)
Oct 17, 12
vocals aren't horrible
were this a more acoustic song, they'd probably sound pretty good
the obvious thing would be to apply a mild lowpass filter to 'em
if you want them to be a bit more distant/less focal, the lowpass is a MUST
and then you could play around a bit with other stuff, flanger, chorus, until you get a better sound
Oct 12, 12
thank you! :)
Oct 12, 12
I thought I favorited this last night? Anyway, perfectly covered :D Coldplay <3
Jul 3, 12
thanks for the feedback! I was waiting for some more constructive critisism on the vocals!
Jul 3, 12
alright that's a good idea! yeah the mic i use is pretty terrible so if I ever record vocals again I'll try editing them to get them to sound good. On this one I didn't really have the patience to do that...I just wanted to get them on the track since recording them was a pain. Yeah they aren't very strong, but I didn't really want the vocals to be the focal point in the song, more of a background addition
Jul 3, 12
The music sounds cool, but you are right about the vocals. They aren't very smooth, and aren't recorded well, and it's pretty week. What I recommend doing to the vocals is editing it a bunch, and putting it though various filters to make it sound cool.
That's what I usually do, since I don't have a super good quality USB microphone, and my voice sounds terrible when I sing anyways, so I usually put it though a bunch of filters and stuff to make it sound cool.
Jun 30, 12
Ok I will TedBeatz! Give me a like a week and I'll publish a version without vocals (I have to try to finish electric love...in one day, and other stuff) thanks :) and youre welcome!
Thanks Paolo Palacios!
Jun 30, 12
Real cool!
Jun 30, 12
Great song by the way; you should defiantly release a version without the vocals though :) (Not that I don't like the vocals, just that it would be cool to have a version without them). And thank you for getting back to me!
Jun 30, 12
Thanks abstract!
TedBeatz to answer your question, it was a pain in da flank. I just used a crappy mic at my house to record the vocals in audiotool. Then I had to manually adjust the bpm so that the pitch wouldn't change too much. And thank you :)
Jun 30, 12
Question: How did you add the vocals so perfectly?
Jun 30, 12
awesome awesome synth work around 0.58 on thats a SICK synth
Jun 26, 12
@Potastic did the picture throw you off? :) haha thanks!
@Comatoast thanks!! :)
@Trill-Pix really? yes im not alone! /)(\
Jun 25, 12
:D !!
Real nice job here!!!
Jun 25, 12
I didn't know you were a boy... but anyways.. Nice voice!! :D And I love the remix too!
Jun 25, 12
alright i will put something on his wall, i dont have a facebook (like the only person who doesn't haha)
Jun 25, 12
just message him via facebook or straight to his wall, or both. I wanna share this
I really like this. I am also trying to figure out effects on user recorded vocals. Good luck with it. This sounds great though. I love that build-up at
don´t panic you did your own version leave it like that "Para-para-paradise!"
Thanks man! wow thank you so much for the advice! I will definetly keep that in mind if I decide to do another song with vocals in it (i might not ever do that though haha)
vocals aren't horrible were this a more acoustic song, they'd probably sound pretty good the obvious thing would be to apply a mild lowpass filter to 'em if you want them to be a bit more distant/less focal, the lowpass is a MUST and then you could play around a bit with other stuff, flanger, chorus, until you get a better sound
thank you! :)
I thought I favorited this last night? Anyway, perfectly covered :D Coldplay <3
thanks for the feedback! I was waiting for some more constructive critisism on the vocals!
alright that's a good idea! yeah the mic i use is pretty terrible so if I ever record vocals again I'll try editing them to get them to sound good. On this one I didn't really have the patience to do that...I just wanted to get them on the track since recording them was a pain. Yeah they aren't very strong, but I didn't really want the vocals to be the focal point in the song, more of a background addition
The music sounds cool, but you are right about the vocals. They aren't very smooth, and aren't recorded well, and it's pretty week. What I recommend doing to the vocals is editing it a bunch, and putting it though various filters to make it sound cool. That's what I usually do, since I don't have a super good quality USB microphone, and my voice sounds terrible when I sing anyways, so I usually put it though a bunch of filters and stuff to make it sound cool.
Ok I will TedBeatz! Give me a like a week and I'll publish a version without vocals (I have to try to finish electric love...in one day, and other stuff) thanks :) and youre welcome! Thanks Paolo Palacios!
Real cool!
Great song by the way; you should defiantly release a version without the vocals though :) (Not that I don't like the vocals, just that it would be cool to have a version without them). And thank you for getting back to me!
Thanks abstract! TedBeatz to answer your question, it was a pain in da flank. I just used a crappy mic at my house to record the vocals in audiotool. Then I had to manually adjust the bpm so that the pitch wouldn't change too much. And thank you :)
Question: How did you add the vocals so perfectly?
awesome awesome synth work around 0.58 on thats a SICK synth
@Potastic did the picture throw you off? :) haha thanks! @Comatoast thanks!! :) @Trill-Pix really? yes im not alone! /)(\
:D !! Real nice job here!!!
I didn't know you were a boy... but anyways.. Nice voice!! :D And I love the remix too!
alright i will put something on his wall, i dont have a facebook (like the only person who doesn't haha)
just message him via facebook or straight to his wall, or both. I wanna share this