My first actual attempt, so feedback please! Inspired by Notoz, Inavon, Sota etc. Also, school's done so I can focus more on improving my music.
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Mikke
about 7 years ago -
RDz • Onyx
about 7 years agoThanks Dei :)
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Dei Servus
about 7 years agoI also like the highpass effects at the breaks. always one of my favorite parts of this music. great job!
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Dei Servus
about 7 years agoLove the perc in the begginnig. but not a fan of the facotory sounds/ percs. I not a fan of the basline too much either. the pad is very nice for this type of music. reminds me of oldschool techno and trance. I have no problem with it really. I can definently tell how inavon inspired this. the "chorus" is alot better than I excpected thugh!!! great job! love the piano too!
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RDz • Onyx
about 7 years agoThanks KrazieKammie and Julia :)
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Julia♥ ｡◕‿‿◕｡ (notactive)
about 7 years agoAlways that awesome!
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RDz • Onyx
about 7 years agoThanks guys :D and @Niko Thanks a lot for the feedback! I'll leave this track alone for now but I'll consider your advice for my next trance track ;)
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Korvent
about 7 years agoThis track is amazing!! But i think it's more acid trace than uplifting trance but it's not important!! Excellent track!!
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Niko
about 7 years agoGreat composition, although you could have made the segment before the breakdown longer. It feels as if you made this too radio friendly if you know what I mean :) Make this segment longer and add some repitition. It could also need a rolling bassline to help with this. The 303 is great, however I'm not fan of the supersaw pad, it is over used. Other than that, I like this. It's got a very good flow.
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ShoKKPoynT
about 7 years agoi like the 303 and the arp and the pads. this ROCKS
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almate
about 7 years agoOnce this song got to the pads, I knew this was going to be a good and true trance song. This song is too perfect! You've successfully made another song that's amazing! Keep making amazing tracks Onyx!
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Kamaro
about 7 years agowow, rly gooood job :)
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Austin Schoessow
about 7 years agoall id have to say is add some voice like some in the future like robotic human voice at about around 48 seconds in but besides that its almost album ready just extend your wobble a little longer that's my advice
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LowFeel
about 7 years agowow,nice track man!
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cripta
about 7 years agonice one...i'm not a big fan of the trance melodic part... but big fan of the acid part :)
wow lovely acid track!