Turned out completely different, but oh well.. (:

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    cabrainvocado

    perfect!!!

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    ntjon

    I agree with the comments ... Go ahead

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    Tyburn

    Agree with the others. Fantastic intro though.

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    arche3.0

    nice. many possible directions you could go with it.

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    cripta

    nice...improvement...mmm a bass ?

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    Asclepeion

    the piano make it so intense olaf this is brillant i like it that way .....for one other version add electric guitar in the background ... but the original is alrdy amazing :)

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    Hbeao

    Sounding good :) I agree with yafeelma, you should vary the melody, just once or twice, to help add more colour to the peice :), I don't really know much, but that's what I think :)

    Can't wait for the final track :D

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    yafee?

    its nice! perhaps some bass melody/riff thruout, or other melody overlay to give it a bit more depth of sound. its good 'as is' tho! :)

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