Unfinished draft, ending was a nifty (tm) experiment.

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Dismantled and salvaged,

The ship is no more.

Bulwark and mast,

Its sails and its oars.

The old captain mourns not,

His memories remain,

They'll not be forgot,

They harbor no pain.

The ship mourns not,

For its passing's untrue,

Its rope used for church bells,

And the wood for pews.

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A year has gone by,

The old captain has passed.

He died in his sleep,

Dreaming of ship and of mast.

The crew reunites,

A toast is proposed,

"To the captain and ship,

With peace may they go."

The circle complete,

Life's journey composed,

Not a measure offbeat,

Fate already knows.

A life of time-wasting,

Just killing hours,

A meaningless endeavor,

Stop, smell the flowers.

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    Apollo

    about 6 months ago

    I'm catching up...

    And this is one of my favourites so far

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    Wightfall

    about 1 year ago

    rip my signature wave samples

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    acloudyskye

    about 1 year ago

    god i've missed so much of your stuff

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    YUKI (Remix Comp)

    about 1 year ago

    OOOOOOOOO

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    herlufsew

    about 1 year ago

    Sindsygt

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    Sunder

    about 1 year ago

    keep up this ambient stuff you've been making

    please

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    Wightfall

    about 1 year ago

    Thanks for the love guys <3

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    leadenshrew

    about 1 year ago

    oh woah, this is incredible

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    aeiter

    about 1 year ago

    fantastic

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    pen.

    about 1 year ago

    god your stuff is gold

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      pen.

      about 1 year ago

      modulation at the end is sick af

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    Saiko Ninja

    about 1 year ago

    another beauty. How do.. you.. do.. it..

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      Wightfall

      about 1 year ago

      Thank you! Lots of practice and some draft studying, and just knowing where to go with drafts from doing it so many times makes the work a lot quicker.

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