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  johann 2018-03-12

  i am cryinggggggg your chords oml

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    Wightfall 2018-03-12

    ;))))) ty

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  Snowfire 2018-03-12

  -_- I dont understand how you people can say that stuff like this is failed

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  Wightfall 2018-02-22

  Republished

  Try this

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    Wightfall 2018-02-22

    Sweet! Thank you for the crit, you're probably one of the best people for crit on this site tbh.

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    Noir 2018-02-22

    Simply being able to turn up my volume a bit helps a ton with how the percussion fits with the rest of the sounds. That does a lot for the clarity of the track!

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  Wightfall 2018-02-22

  Republished

  Let's see if this is better

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    Wightfall 2018-02-22

    eh not really, i think its worse

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  Noir 2018-02-22

  This is close to brilliance! The reverb is causing problems with overcompression, especially with the pads at 1:00 . There are a couple options to get around this: bring down the reverb, or set your mix lower. The overall volume will be quieter if you go with the latter, but that's fine if it helps improve the clarity of the track. There are also some groove issues that pop up here and there, mostly relating to how the percussion samples gel with the rest of the sounds...

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    Wightfall 2018-02-22

    Thank you!! I'll definitely go and and work with lowering the volume. No guarantees until I can hear the drums and piano again but I'll do my best!

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    Noir 2018-02-22

    The track is at its strongest when one sound dominates the space, and I think that's probably because the volume is so high in the mix that when multiple sounds in the same frequency range play at the same time, the sound gets a bit muddied. Backing off just a touch should do wonders for this track.

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    Noir 2018-02-22

    These can be fixed with a little attention to how the kick and hats interact with the synth sounds. The composition is simply lovely. Really well done harmonic leading, and the middle section especially stands out.

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  pen. 2018-02-21

  00:55 close to tears ngl

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    Wightfall 2018-02-22

    ;))))))))

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    pen. 2018-02-21

    piano solo in the bridge is so cool omf

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  Wightfall 2018-02-21

  ugly waveform tho ew

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    pen. 2018-02-21

    i like me a thicc waveform

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  pen. 2018-02-21

  uwu will listen in a jiffy