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  • Republished

    Added different melodies and extended the track a measure. Plus, I mixed it better and I think I fixed the issue with the volumes and mixing, and synths and stuffs...

  • what I do like is the chords and melody, I think it could sound really nice with a bit of volume adjustments and mixing

  • otherwise I would recommend adding a bit of variation too

  • so, first of all, I need to say its clipping nearly everywhere, you need to adjust the volume in a lot of places, it needs a serious amount of mixing, for example the pads are all, interfering with each other, try to give them a bit of personal space with an EQ or filter. The same goes for the bass, each element does not have to explode in volume, when it is alone in a place it stands out by itself

  • I would also love some feedback.

  • Republished

    Mixed it a bit more and added more energy... I think.