The Stars

Jay'D (BACK)
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this is my first song that is %100 orig it not very long but im getting there :)

         
Mar 31, 15

You should finish this

Mar 29, 15

I really do like this!

Feb 19, 15

i think im done till i do a longer one in the summer

Feb 4, 15

ya i know ima fix that

Feb 3, 15

ya i have that on this song xD

Feb 3, 15

what do you mean?

Jan 29, 15

ik im geting there ok just wate

Jan 28, 15

Nice!

Jan 28, 15

yes man :) this has potential like @tomturbo said. he is right about the EQing. but other than that the melody is going good. the attacks are fine imo. and dont cut off TOO much high end. that kind of sound makes the high end fill up a bit, just add chords and a beat and shit and your good to go

Jan 28, 15

Gahhh! it wont play

Jan 28, 15

hmm..is that the song you mentioned? The melody has potential! :) But you should really set a filter cutoff on the highs..it hurts my ears bro :) and maybe a slower attack..try that modulation you did on the eq on the filter cutoff ;) i can show you some tips on a draft or in FB chatt if you want ;)

Jan 28, 15

no is no ok

Jan 28, 15

no sorry im making this for @darklite138 sorry

Jan 28, 15

thx its a WIP so i hope it works out :)

Jan 28, 15

cool