Time and Space and Stuff

Caleb Nathan
663 Sep 9, 17 EDM
0:00 / 4:09
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EDM tranng caleb new CC BY 73 BPM

this really needs critiquing. any help is greatly appreciated. thanks frens.

         
Mar 3, 21

First comment in two years

Dec 13, 18

Those synths

Dec 13, 18

Ooooooh Wow Ear Candy man

Apr 12, 18

I’m gonna un-hide this. This was the first step towards shit like SEVENTY5 and Aquatic Remix

Oct 27, 17

WoW!!! Beautiful composition!

Oct 27, 17

thank you

Oct 16, 17

I really like the mellow parts of this song. They feel a lot more unique than the loud eighth notes "drop" if that is an applicable term.

Oct 16, 17

Ya know, i can agree with you

Oct 9, 17

HOLY SHIT WAS SO FUCKING SEXY!!!!!

Oct 9, 17

Thank you!

Sep 15, 17

DOSE BLIPS THO!

Sep 16, 17

I'm glad you like them

Sep 11, 17

Dope

Sep 11, 17

Right off the bat, the sub is *not* too strong, so points there. You have nice chords and a good melody to complement them, with that delayed resolution at the end to keep us on our toes. I like that. I also really like that you weren't afraid to let this get quiet. As for critique, the percussion doesn't feel like it fits with the rest of the sounds. Especially at 0.52, where it suddenly disrupts the flow we had until that point.

Sep 11, 17

By choosing percussion rhythms that play around a little more, or by changing up the rhythms in your synths, you can bring in a little interplay to help those sections stand out more.

Sep 11, 17

This isn't necessarily a bad thing, but consider that the half-tempo beat you use is often open like that to highlight a part of a song that has a different characteristic, to let that show through. You alter the timbre of your synths where the percussion is strongest, but the harmonic qualities, rhythmic qualities, and melodic qualities are fairly similar to what we hear in the other sections.

Sep 11, 17

This also falls into the same problem that a lot of songs fall into here, where the looping chord progression doesn't get anything to break it up at all, so by the end it's starting to feel a little worn out. Having a section with different chords and a different melody would help break that up. Also, consider that when your chords are straight ahead eighths, there isn't much chance for rhythmic variation.

Sep 9, 17

Hope this takes over as my most popular track bc I fucking hate my top track

Sep 11, 17

Oh hold on, one of my other track overtook Warm Greeting? Awesome!

Sep 11, 17

(I meant Warm Greeting, not Lime lol)