Okay, I've mastered and edited a bit. May still make changes.
Edit: MAde longer, removed snare roll, and added compression.
Edit:Removed hard compression, added limiter, tried make synths less resonant. Thank you frigolito for your help. i think this is finished now.
I like the melody here, but that sound at is a bit weird to me and I think it clashes with the other synth at . But this is definitely the best I've heard from you. :)
Dec 26, 11
(I wrote more than 512 letters so I had to make it into 2 comments instead of 1. Now I'll be quiet! XD)
Dec 26, 11
And less good: The most annoying thing with this track is that you used so much compression, which made the drums almost disappear at some moments, so I would like to reduce the average compression in this track. You should put the compression at the high resonance synths instead. I would also like to get rid of the gap at , maybe by linking the parts together in a tasteful way.
I hope you find this helpful somehow. Good work so far! :)
Dec 26, 11
Hello r4c7! Your post on my wall brought me here. Now for the critique:
Good: I like your synth sounds in this track, they are both creative and interesting to listen to. Maybe you could just reduce the resonance of the melodious sounds so we can hear your ideas better.
Dec 24, 11
Awesome!
Dec 24, 11
great one!
Dec 24, 11
very nice...love that arp synth sound !
Dec 24, 11
great yeah
Dec 23, 11
Welll done m8 N1! :)
Dec 23, 11
Yes, I feel a lot more for this, so you may want to watch out. I may give the new version a new name and pic too, so don't be surprised if you hear something similar.
Dec 23, 11
LIKE THE HEAVY SYNTH NICE WORK
Dec 23, 11
I tried bumping the tempo up to 140, but that seemed too fast. I am definitely going to make a heavier beat listening back to this and ditch the dub-step beat (and the bass wobble), I'm just going to make this full on house.
Dec 23, 11
There are some good synths in this. I hear with a faster tempo and a heavier beat though. Have you considered thumping it up a bit?
nice synhtsounds!
cool r4 sounds good man !
I like the melody here, but that sound at is a bit weird to me and I think it clashes with the other synth at . But this is definitely the best I've heard from you. :)
(I wrote more than 512 letters so I had to make it into 2 comments instead of 1. Now I'll be quiet! XD)
And less good: The most annoying thing with this track is that you used so much compression, which made the drums almost disappear at some moments, so I would like to reduce the average compression in this track. You should put the compression at the high resonance synths instead. I would also like to get rid of the gap at , maybe by linking the parts together in a tasteful way. I hope you find this helpful somehow. Good work so far! :)
Hello r4c7! Your post on my wall brought me here. Now for the critique: Good: I like your synth sounds in this track, they are both creative and interesting to listen to. Maybe you could just reduce the resonance of the melodious sounds so we can hear your ideas better.
Awesome!
great one!
very nice...love that arp synth sound !
great yeah
Welll done m8 N1! :)
Yes, I feel a lot more for this, so you may want to watch out. I may give the new version a new name and pic too, so don't be surprised if you hear something similar.
LIKE THE HEAVY SYNTH NICE WORK
I tried bumping the tempo up to 140, but that seemed too fast. I am definitely going to make a heavier beat listening back to this and ditch the dub-step beat (and the bass wobble), I'm just going to make this full on house.
There are some good synths in this. I hear with a faster tempo and a heavier beat though. Have you considered thumping it up a bit?
very nice modern style :)