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Well... this turned out interesting... I think I might have rushed myself even though I shouldn't have.

         
Jan 9, 14

Any tips from anyone on what I should ad?

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Jan 9, 14

Don't know what else to add... Suggestions PLEASE!!!

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Jan 9, 14

Still working on it

Jan 9, 14

I don't know if I should keep the part at ... it sounds odd to me.