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  • incoming crit:

    track is too empty.

    needs better sound design. the synths are either too white noisy or too muddy

    the snare is too loud and the kick needs to come in the mix more. i'd add more percussion elements as well. cymbals, rides, crashes, hats,etc.

    it's clipping in certain parts too like 2:50

  • Dude mind if i remix this song?

  • Republished

    thx for the suggestions..hopefully sounds a bit better.

  • snare and kick too loud

  • If it were me as well i'd fill the track out a little with fx, variety in percussion etc :)

  • yeah i like the ideas for sure in this, i love that snare as well! This track would benefit significantly from having some solid eq, especially that lead bass in the drop :)