Good song! You have some pretty neat synths going on here, and the song has a nice calm feel to it. However, I feel as though the song lasts a bit too long, and it seems to simply repeat previous sections after until .
Here's what you could do:
Take the part at , move it to and extend it, possibly putting the spotlight on a low synth, guitar, or something after a while. Then after that, cut straight to and make a new ending to the song.
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Good song! You have some pretty neat synths going on here, and the song has a nice calm feel to it. However, I feel as though the song lasts a bit too long, and it seems to simply repeat previous sections after until . Here's what you could do: Take the part at , move it to and extend it, possibly putting the spotlight on a low synth, guitar, or something after a while. Then after that, cut straight to and make a new ending to the song.
Deleted awkward silence at the end. Added subbas
Deleted awkward silence at the end. Adde subbas
this is good! would be neato to add some sub