Your vocal quality has gotten a lot better, I can see the effort you put into mixing them. However I feel like the mic you invested in (probably a headphone mic you’re using ) is what’s messing you up. Ultimately making the song sound kinda iffy for some. If anything grab your phone, get bandlab and sign into it, and then make sure to get WIRED Apple headphones, and make sure to record in a quiet space. This will ensure better mic quality so you don’t have to spend a lot of time trying to
Heart hummin' low, like a sad song soft,
Every memory kinda hits when I cough.
Purple potion thoughts driftin' aloft,
Tryna find some peace just for a cough.
Whispers come back dancin' in low glow,
Sayin' your name soft wherever I go.
Wish I'd rewrite chapters good feelings flow,
Now I'm caught up in the afterglow.
She was an angel with somethin' wild,
Got me tangled in her gaze like a child.
Now I'm slippin' further kinda exiled,
This Purple Devil spirit kinda riled.
Purple Devil yeah got a hold on me
Lost in the darkness wanna break free
Every little taste just takes a piece of me
Drowning in blue mood can't you agree?
Purple Devil why so sweet, then cold?
Leavin' me in fragments story untold.
My heart's a quiet place feelin' old
Another lonely night story unfolds
Remember late nights starin' at the ceilin'?
Now the silence screams emptiness revealin'.
Purple in my glass temporary feelin',
Real pain comes back wounds start yeah healin'.
Break again like glass on the floor,
Wish I'd forget what we were fightin' for.
Guess some love ain't meant to last more,
Just leaves you broken at a closed door.
Purple Devil yeah yeah
Purple Devil yeah yeah
Purple Devil yeah yeah yeah yeah
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ion got time XD, plus i just do it for fun so its honestly wtv, altho i think the clearest vocals i have so far is the newer rap after this one, its called Feel Alive
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would be cool if the vocals had some effect like flanger
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master the vocals, although it’s good you’re doing this but better mic quality + with this mixing = a replica of like a studio recording session
(Don’t really have a big understanding of mixing)
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Beautiful hmm idk nothing needs fixed
