my soul

ER_445
143 Jan 14, 25 Ambient
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this my first song in AT so enjoy and give me your feedback

         
Mar 31, 25

So I just listened to this one again and yea I'm with everyone else. Pretty cool tune for the 1st track. Not bad.

Jan 30, 25

nice work

Jan 20, 25

very nice

Jan 20, 25

thanks

Jan 19, 25

I agree with everybody, this is really good for your first time. I honestly wish I was already this good at making tracks from scratch when I first got on AT

Jan 19, 25

ty so much

Jan 19, 25

W first song. You actually got a taste in melody and structure. 100% you can be a good artist,

Jan 19, 25

thanks

Jan 18, 25

This is really good! Especially for this being your first song! I love it! Great job! Cant wait to see what else you make!

Jan 18, 25

thanks

Jan 18, 25

Very Cool.

Jan 18, 25

ty bro

Jan 18, 25

Dang, this brings me back to when I published my first track on audio tool. I remember being so psyched, and being so excited. I feel proud of myself for having watched some tutorials and gotten enough of the basics to actually write notes with one of the instruments, instead of just splicing samples. Yours is way better than mine was lol but we all gotta start somewhere

Jan 18, 25

i wanted your feedback because i khow that you have a lot of experience to give me some ideas and advices for developing my songs

Jan 18, 25

thanks @levoile for your feedback and your ideas

Jan 18, 25

One thing I will say though is that the track feels a bit lengthy. I mean if it's a soundtrack, it makes sense but as a single unit, I think you could probably stop it around the 2 minute 30 second mark. Or at least fill that Gap a bit more. I honestly thought the song was over and it was moving on the next song and then I realized the same song was still playing when the music came back.

Jan 18, 25

I like the eerie vibe, but I also like when the drums come in around that creates this kind of vibe that reminds me of like old GoldenEye games on Nintendo 64. Or Perfect Dark. Very eerie and atmospheric. The song is simple, it's basic, but it feels effective. I think this is a great step forward as your first published track, and if you ever want more detailed feedback or help feel free to message my wall or DM me. Thank you for sharing this with me! Keep up the good work :)

Jan 15, 25

i like the stutter thing along with the drums at , the flow is pretty cool :) i'd probably add a bass when the drums come in or something like that - maybe like a short stabby bass would work well here. good job! :)

Jan 15, 25

ty bro for the feedback

Jan 15, 25

In my opinion it definitely could be more upbeat. But that's just my view on it. But its pretty nice.