maybe experiment with switching up the velocities of the drum samples to give some more acoustic sound? the hihat is loud and gets kind of monotonous, and since its so exposed, that kind of takes away from the beautiful mood you have going on with the other stuff. and the thing at , the actual melodic line isnt problematic, just try to find a sound that fits the rest of the track. i really love the notes you put down though, beautiful work :)
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maybe experiment with switching up the velocities of the drum samples to give some more acoustic sound? the hihat is loud and gets kind of monotonous, and since its so exposed, that kind of takes away from the beautiful mood you have going on with the other stuff. and the thing at , the actual melodic line isnt problematic, just try to find a sound that fits the rest of the track. i really love the notes you put down though, beautiful work :)
this has a lot of potential
What happened?!?!?
fixed random sub note at end