I really like these melodies and chord progressions. I wish there was a little more modulation in timbre (granted... I know it's short). But sections of the string runs that could do with slightly darker qualities. I'm not sure what string libraries you're using, but making use of woodwinds specifically clarinets, bass clarinets, and oboe to alternate compositional textures would really bring this to the next level.
no i take inspiration mostly from 86 re zero violet evergarden , i just realized this song (link is only visible to registered users) sounds kinda similar this basically a pluggnb progression with those sounds