Jeses Christ even in this miserable weather in my shitty country with just negativity just pulsing more than ever, I'm here in my room escaping it all and damn that sample is helping me almost think of a brighter more positive future more spiritual future even amongst the dark shit in the world this sample is just so awe inspiring.
WTF amazing!!!!! This is the kind of Hip-Hop sound design and just vibe, emotions, mood and spirituality that the Industry needs right now. You could actually produce for Kendrick if he makes a Boom Bap ( musical, lyrical, structural, vibe) theme based Album.
The transition at
03:52
could be cleaner for me. I think the unexpected aspect is cool but could be better if it was a lot smoother (ik it is hard to do with samples) ! Same goes for
05:02
. At
05:18
, I think if the low frequencies were filled with an echo from the vocals by the use of the quasar/reverb it would be great where the most reverb is automated to be released in the emptiness. Idk why you included this at
06:30
...
06:50
would sound better if polished better with curve and subdued atad
Thanks for the feedback I agree with a lot of wat u said
6:30
to
6:50
I was gonna put a verses but decided not to at the last min so it's unfinished lol
Feeback: Would prefer a gradual, 10 secondish intro, starting from something subdued or simply instrumental leading up to how it is mixed atm. The vocals repeating at
01:07
could be softened just a tiny bit imo. At
01:49
, I think it should transition somewhere around
02:59
and
03:08
because its just repeating itself at
1:49
with a some differently-patterned chops and drums or just do the bpm switch-up earlier at
1:49
.