lyrics
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Days sleep away, in the tapestry of grace,
Lost in the twilight, where time finds no fucking trace,
In this realm of tranquility, our spirits intertwine,
Ethereal reverie, unfolding dreams so damn divine,
Days sleep away, as darkness takes its fucking flight,
Whispering winds carry melodies of the night,
Silhouettes dance as twilight unveils its grace,
Dusk descends upon the horizon's fucking great embrace.
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(Parts of it being reversed)
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Days sleep away, in the tapestry of grace,
Lost in the twilight, where time finds no fucking trace,
In this realm of tranquility, our spirits intertwine,
Ethereal reverie, unfolding dreams so damn divine,
Days sleep away, as darkness takes its fucking flight,
Whispering winds carry melodies of the night,
Silhouettes dance as twilight unveils its grace,
Dusk descends upon the horizon's fucking great embrace.
Nice sound design. But I’m with that one dude who doesn’t like the f words much too lol
Nov 14, 23
Thanks for this amazing moment !
Nov 13, 23
Amazing, I like how you incorporated the vocals
Nov 13, 23
Cant wait to hear it!
Nov 13, 23
It's good, I'm trying to add vocals to my next track too lol
Nov 13, 23
Yes i did!
Nov 13, 23
Did you record them?
Nov 12, 23
Pretty cool, all i really think is that the vocals need slightly more pertinence or high end, then lower the volume a bit with a bit more reverb on them
Nov 11, 23
Seeing as you only added the vocals, that's what I'll comment on:
Not a fan of the use of autotune, particularly the robotic implementation of it. Ironically there's still a few notes that land a bit off key.
Creating some backing vocals, double tracking the lead vocal, and some adlibs would all be nice additions to what you've got here.
Only other thing I'd do is sink the vocals a little more into the mix as they're a bit upfront at the moment.
Nov 10, 23
I like it 👍
Nov 10, 23
bro cooked :D
Nov 10, 23
Thx u! i appreciate it
Nov 10, 23
gyat dayum
voice a lil deep
beat FIRE ASF
Nov 10, 23
You can thank sunder for the amazing beat!
Nov 10, 23
I like this a lot! Like virux said, the delivery of the lyrics aren't my preferred, but still, great stuff overall. Looking forward to collaborating with you 🤝
Nov 10, 23
of course!
Nov 10, 23
Alright, I may check it out then, thanks 👍
Nov 10, 23
it has autotune and layering for the vocals too
Nov 10, 23
so i use an app called vocloo. its so that you can make songs an edit your vocals. its free but i paid for a subscription so that i can layer them.
Nov 10, 23
I'm curious what effects you used on your vocals, as well as how you made them sound like that? Just wondering because I'm still trying to learn how to work with vocals in general, and because I don't have a mic that's compatible with my Macbook I've resorted to using Audacity to record my vocals for the most decent quality I can get. Have any tips?
Nice sound design. But I’m with that one dude who doesn’t like the f words much too lol
Thanks for this amazing moment !
Amazing, I like how you incorporated the vocals
Pretty cool, all i really think is that the vocals need slightly more pertinence or high end, then lower the volume a bit with a bit more reverb on them
Seeing as you only added the vocals, that's what I'll comment on: Not a fan of the use of autotune, particularly the robotic implementation of it. Ironically there's still a few notes that land a bit off key. Creating some backing vocals, double tracking the lead vocal, and some adlibs would all be nice additions to what you've got here. Only other thing I'd do is sink the vocals a little more into the mix as they're a bit upfront at the moment.
I like it 👍
bro cooked :D
gyat dayum voice a lil deep beat FIRE ASF
I like this a lot! Like virux said, the delivery of the lyrics aren't my preferred, but still, great stuff overall. Looking forward to collaborating with you 🤝